(Task)
Write an essay about video games. Are you for or against them? (85-100 words).
- Identifico la estructura exigida: título, introducción, párrafo a favor, párrafo en contra y conclusión con predicciones.
- Redacto el título: Are Video Games Bad for Us?
- Escribo la introducción presentando el tema y mi postura (a favor con matices).
- Desarrollo el párrafo a favor con dos razones: mejoran la coordinación y permiten socializar en línea.
- Desarrollo el párrafo en contra con dos razones: exceso de tiempo frente a pantallas y menor actividad física.
- Cierro con una conclusión que hace una predicción sobre el futuro de los videojuegos.
Respuesta:
Are Video Games Bad for Us?
Nowadays, video games are part of many teenagers' daily lives. Some people love them, while others think they are a waste of time. In my opinion, they are good if we play with balance.
On the one hand, video games are great because they improve our coordination and problem-solving skills. Also, we can play online with friends from other cities or countries, so they help us socialise.
On the other hand, some games can be addictive. If we play for many hours, we stop doing exercise and we may get bad grades at school.
To sum up, video games will probably become even more popular in the future. I believe we will learn to enjoy them responsibly, without forgetting real life.
(≈100 words)
Título
Respuesta: Are Video Games Bad for Us?
Are Video Games Bad for Us?
Introducción
Respuesta: Nowadays, video games are part of many teenagers' daily lives. Some people love them, while others think they are a waste of time. In my opinion, they are good if we play with balance.
Nowadays, video games are part of many teenagers' daily lives. Some people love them, while others think they are a waste of time. In my opinion, they are good if we play with balance.
Párrafo a favor
Respuesta: On the one hand, video games are great because they improve our coordination and problem-solving skills. Also, we can play online with friends from other cities or countries, so they help us socialise.
On the one hand, video games are great because they improve our coordination and problem-solving skills. Also, we can play online with friends from other cities or countries, so they help us socialise.
Párrafo en contra
Respuesta: On the other hand, some games can be addictive. If we play for many hours, we stop doing exercise and we may get bad grades at school.
On the other hand, some games can be addictive. If we play for many hours, we stop doing exercise and we may get bad grades at school.
Conclusión con predicciones
Respuesta: To sum up, video games will probably become even more popular in the future. I believe we will learn to enjoy them responsibly, without forgetting real life.
To sum up, video games will probably become even more popular in the future. I believe we will learn to enjoy them responsibly, without forgetting real life.








